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Ringo Ichijo · 03-04-2008, 11:33 PM

The Apperception of Song in Perfect Silence

Hush...
They may be sleeping.
In the well, I heard them speaking.
Down at the bottom,
Where you'd never know a minute was ever wasted,
The hide from their spectators.
Wistfully, just as breathlessly, they murmur.

Soft-spoken and chiming lucidly,
Their sweet sopranoes ring in one quiet refrain:
"I couldn't have seen this coming."

Whispers one to another,
"The end is what we've come to know,
And what we know has been clear from the beginning.
Riddle me this, then:
What have we found?"

Now, in one swift motion, they make sense of nothing,
Or something incorporeally existant.
In light of this theory,
What do you say?

so basically, i'm not sure i like this one very much... i think it's a bit too dark for my style... but my friend says this is my best... so tell me what you think... PLEASE?!?!!?

03-04-2008, 11:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ringo Ichijo Official GTF Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: ohio Age: 15 Gender: Posts: 59	The Apperception of Song in Perfect Silence. The Apperception of Song in Perfect Silence Hush... They may be sleeping. In the well, I heard them speaking. Down at the bottom, Where you'd never know a minute was ever wasted, The hide from their spectators. Wistfully, just as breathlessly, they murmur. Soft-spoken and chiming lucidly, Their sweet sopranoes ring in one quiet refrain: "I couldn't have seen this coming." Whispers one to another, "The end is what we've come to know, And what we know has been clear from the beginning. Riddle me this, then: What have we found?" Now, in one swift motion, they make sense of nothing, Or something incorporeally existant. In light of this theory, What do you say? so basically, i'm not sure i like this one very much... i think it's a bit too dark for my style... but my friend says this is my best... so tell me what you think... PLEASE?!?!!? __________________ "What is anonymity worth to you, and how is it different from being alone?"