Ringo Ichijo

The Apperception of Song in Perfect Silence

Hush...
They may be sleeping.
In the well, I heard them speaking.
Down at the bottom,
Where you'd never know a minute was ever wasted,
The hide from their spectators.
Wistfully, just as breathlessly, they murmur.

Soft-spoken and chiming lucidly,
Their sweet sopranoes ring in one quiet refrain:
"I couldn't have seen this coming."

Whispers one to another,
"The end is what we've come to know,
And what we know has been clear from the beginning.
Riddle me this, then:
What have we found?"

Now, in one swift motion, they make sense of nothing,
Or something incorporeally existant.
In light of this theory,
What do you say?


so basically, i'm not sure i like this one very much... i think it's a bit too dark for my style... but my friend says this is my best... so tell me what you think... PLEASE?!?!!?

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Adrastus

I suck at interpreting poems or artsy stuff like this , so i couldn't follow it at all to be honest ahaha. But thats just me, as I said. Now if you gave me a chemical equation - you'd be in my domain now : D ahahaha.

Sorry mate - you'll have to wait for the next person to come along.

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